So how does the following sound as a blurb? (I can’t believe I agonize over such bits of verbage)
Do You Like To Swim?
We are starting a
pittsburgh swim team
for
gays, lesbians, bisexuals,
and friends of the community
open to all ability levels.
Interested? email differentstrokes@pobox.com for more information.
ability levels
I’d join if I lived in Pittsburgh …
But you forgot the Transgendered.
Otherwise it looks great — be sure to use pictures of men in skimpy bathing suits along the margins :o)
Re: ability levels
I’m trying to attract people for whom the post-swim shower is a bonus perk, not a raison d’etre =) (or however you spell it)
It’ll be the swim team pic from my little pictorial travel log =)